Agnishatdal Boisakh 1427 April 2020
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Critique by Sharmishtha Basu
By your good old editor! Few words about the works of my much cherished authors. So the critiques will be honest, short and sweet!
hisab by Labanya: What a poem! Don’t we all throw away diamonds and gather pebbles once in a while and then regret!
Farce in the name of justice by saptarchi: These news items only see the real India of lately, hypocrisy blown away. This country has no place for righteous, honest and innocents! They will be destroyed sooner or later! The evil, corrupt and unscrupulous will flourish! For how long I wonder!
Fogline by Brieuc Martin Onraet: A terrific story has began, this is the first story I read in Brian’s blog and absolutely loved it! Can’t wait to share it with you all! I do hope and pray this book when Brian publishes it will hit bestseller!
Vikrama aur betala by Raghunandan Kuppuswamy: I have not read this story, that part is for sure! The sculptor was smart for sure, smart people never stay around powerful people who can make or break them.
Gardens of Sarusammog 2 by Troy David Loy: Saru meets Korravi! I just love Saru’s stories. He is so much fun!
The dark made its mark by Dom Collucci: beautiful poem. So very wise and deep.
Bitter Pill dose 29 by Bitter Pill: politics 5: Indian media is mistress of Indian politicians, they have a very symbiotic relationship that is bad for the rest of the country.
Prophets of God by Brendan: Great piece Brendan. Your works truly are unique and very authentic. I too belong to that category who prefer sages, saints and prophets alive not crucified!
The shearer by Pat Ritters: Fantastic piece, Jack is out of the jail and is reprimanded by the bartender on his way to his lodgings. Pat is a great writer and I for one am thoroughly enjoying this journey into the lives of Australian cowboys.
I believe that will be it for my critique as an editor, you will have to read the rest in Ezine. Of course there is truckloads of more works there!